8 pg body of research paper 4 pg summary paperThesis Mozart was a great and versatile musical copper

Please follow and read directions need a 8 page Body of research paper and 4 page summary paper on my Thesis Mozart was a great and versatile musical composer. Im sending you my intro page please modify also i’m attaching an example of another student Research project Please follow format. I have data Entries and Annotated Bibliographies and Franciscan Essay Ill send

Lisa Flacco

Assignment #7 Unit 3 ELP Introduction

14 February 2017

Lisa,

The assessment chart is first and followed by your work with the corrections highlighted in yellow. Explanations are in red print.

Following your Works Cited source is the corrected Introduction without the highlighted yellow words and red print.

As an observation, it is best to write short and concise sentences in your own words. Avoid the use of extra words to begin a sentence or within a sentence. Be sure that you understand the meaning of all words and phrases before using them in a sentence. Direct quotations must be cited and have quotation marks.

As reminder, carefully read all directions for the ELP. There is a folder on the Home Page with information on the organization and structure of the ELP-Paper.

I sent the “Assessment Key and Information” document attached to a course message. That document contains rules for grammar and punctuation. Numbers following a correction correspond to the numbers of the items in the “Assessment Key and Information.”

Good luck on your ELP-Journey, JL

ASSESSMENT CHART:

ELP-INTRODUCTION

SCORE: 2-Points (2 Points – Possible Score)

Criteria & Possible Score Comments & Score

.50 Point –WHAT: The introductory paragraph that includes the Thesis Statement – as stated on your ELP Contract on page two.	.50 – The thesis was stated with introductory sentences. See Corrections.
.50 Point –WHY:The Rationale for this research-ELP-Paper. This is on your ELP Contract – page one. Clearly state your rationale – For example: The rationale for doing this Experiential Learning Project is ………………………………	.50 – The Rationale for Research was stated. See corrections.
.50 Point – How: The Summary of the Design. How did you conduct your research. This is on the chart of your ELP Contract – page one. Clearly state the Design of the Research – For example: The design of this research was to use books, journal articles, data bases, ………. in order to collect expert research on this topic. The ELP-Experiential Research Journal contains the personal research of the writer of this paper. All research was conducted from …..(date)….. to ….(.date) .	.50 The summary of the Design for expert and personal research was stated. See Corrections.
.50 Point – MLA Format; Neumann requirements for spacing, indentation, margins; writing style; grammar, punctuation.	.50 – MLA-Format was correct for margins and spacing. See corrections for grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure.

COMMENTS: The Introduction contained all of the required components.

There are corrections and suggestions in the document’s comments and in the assessment chart.

For this Introduction assignment, points are not deducted for the requested corrections. However, In the Body of Research and Summary assignments, I would not expect to see anything that has been noted in this assignment to be corrected.

SUGGESTIONS:

1. Select a tense (ie present or past) to be the “voice” for your entire paper. Since the entire paper will be a paper on the research that you have completed, the entire paper can be in the past tense. – Whatever tense you decide to use should be used throughout the paper.

2. All expert research must be cited with in-text citations in MLA Format. Each in-text citation would correspond to a full citation on the Works Cited page. Do not forget that MLA Format requires page numbers.

RULES FOR IN-TEXT CITATION:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/

Introduction

Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart was a prolific as well as (the = take out extra word) one of the most celebrated composers of Classical music (Keefe et al. 66). (Not MLA-Format = Keefe, et.al, pg, 66 – MLA-Format = https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/02/). His music stands as an archetypal example of the Classical style. Research indicates that his works spanned the period during which that style transformed from one exemplified by the style galant hence; incorporated some of the contrapuntal complexities. (See the suggested wording) As stated, 2 Mozart was a versatile composer as well and wrote in almost every major genre (, = no comma) including symphony, opera, the solo concerto, chamber music including string quartets, and the piano sonata. Mozart expressed his great talent as a versatile classical musical composer.

The punctuation in the sentence was not correct. This style is the overlapping of an old style and a new style. – Suggested rewording: Research indicates that his works spanned the period during which his style was transformed from one exemplified by the galant style, which incorporated some of the contrapuntal complexities (In-text citation of the source is needed).

One of the main rationales for doing this Experiential Learning Project was to learn and get to know more about this artist. Basically, 2 (; = no semi-colon) this writer (we = write only in the third person. We is the first person plural) can say that the goal is to educate the reader on the rise of this artist and a few challenges that he experienced in his life. This writer will learn how he would emerge to be the world’s composer of classical music.

The following should be eliminated since it has nothing to do with your rationale for research. Also, you would not cite the sentences about your rationale.

(Keefe, et.al, pg, 101). It is apparent that Mozart’s music has uncomplicated texture that would become a defining trait of the “Classical” era. This type or kind of style which is commonly known as homophonic music is characterized by a single melodic idea accompanied by a choral underpinning which makes his music a classic.

(Remove extra words = In the quest to collect expert research;) The design of the research for this project was based on books and journal. This included analyzing expert works for Mozart through experiencing the great works by (for) Mozart as a versatile classical musical composer. (Remove the following: as depicted in the journals as well as books that I have used in this essay.) (Remove extra word and semi-colon is not correct – Lastly;) The ELP-Experiential Research Data Entries contain the personal research of the writer of this paper. All research was conducted from January 28^th to March 20^th, 2017. (Give yourself more time because you may need to revise work).

Works Cited

Keefe, Simon P. “WOLFGANG AMADEUS MOZART (1756–1791), WITH COMMENTARY BY ROBERT D. LEVIN AND PREFACE BY COLIN LAWSON KLAVIERKONZERT C-MOLL, KV 491: BÄRENREITER FACSIMILE Kassel: Bärenreiter, 2014 pp. 74 (facsimile)+ 40 (commentary), isbn 978 3 7618 1927 2.” Eighteenth Century Music 13.01 (2016): 134-136.

The above citation is not correct. It must be in MLA Format.

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Introduction

Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart was a prolific as well as one of the most celebrated composers of Classical music (Keefe et al. 66).His music stands as an archetypal example of the Classical style. Research indicates that his works spanned the period during which his style was transformed from one exemplified by the galant style, which incorporated some of the contrapuntal complexities (In-text citation of the source is needed (In-text citation needed).

As stated, Mozart was a versatile composer as well and wrote in almost every major genre including symphony, opera, the solo concerto, chamber music including string quartets, and the piano sonata. Mozart expressed his great talent as a versatile classical musical composer.

The rationale for doing this Experiential Learning Project was to learn and get to know more about this artist. Basically, this writer can say that the goal was to educate the reader on the rise of this artist and a few challenges that he experienced in his life. This writer learned how Mozart would emerge to be the world’s composer of classical music.

The design of the research for this project was based on books and journal. This included analyzing expert works for Mozart through experiencing the great works by Mozart as a versatile classical musical composer. The ELP-Experiential Research Data Entries contain the personal research of the writer of this paper. All research was conducted from January 28^th to March 20^th, 2017.