review 3 essays

I will attach the essay when accepted

Read each point carefully and decide whether your classmate’s paper achieves those points. To provide your comments on each point, go to Google Docs and type your comments on your classmate’s paper. Provide clear and detailed comments using the comments function. Additionally, point out any other issues that you can see. Superficial or simplistic comments will cause you to lose peer-review points.

When addressing the questions for each section below, highlight a specific sentence or a couple of sentences and then type your response as a comment.

Introduction

• Does the introduction introduce the topic of stereotypes?
• Does the introduction introduce the author and the title of the work? Does it provide background information about the author?
• Is the author’s main argument mentioned accurately?
• Highlight the thesis. Is it a good critique thesis? Are there any problems with it?

Summary Paragraph

• Is the summary around 100 words?
• Does the summary mention the main points in the order they appear in the original text?
• Does the summary leave out unnecessary details.
• Is the summary well-paraphrased (no changes in meaning)?

Critique Paragraphs

• Highlight the topic sentence of each body paragraph. Is it a clear topic sentence that introduces the focus of that paragraph? If not, how can it be improved?
• Do critique paragraphs focus on the guiding provided in the PowerPoint and assignment prompt?
• Do critique paragraphs successfully identify strengths and weakness of the arguments?
• Are the critique points explained clearly?
• Are the critique points relevant?
• Did the author avoid excessive quoting from the original text?
• Did the author avoid irrelevant comments (e.g., how the readers feel)?
• Are there any repetitions or sentences that break the flow?
• Are there any irrelevant examples/sentences that break the flow?

Conclusion

• Does the conclusion start with the restatement of the main points?
• Does the conclusion briefly explain how/why the evaluation was reached?
• If possible, does the conclusion provide any recommendations?

Formatting and Grammar

• Is the APA cover page formatted correctly?
• Are the rest of the pages formatted according to APA? Are the in-text citations done correctly?
• Are the end-of-text references formatted correctly?
• Do the end-of-text references match the in-text citations?
• Does the author use academic tone and vocabulary?
• Do you see any of the issues that are mentioned in the Common Errors document?
• Are there any ambiguous sentences due to vocabulary choice or weak grammar?
• Are there any sentence fragments or any run-on sentences?
• Are there any punctuation or spelling mistakes?